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[Ryu vs. Ken]

good work

i think this was a good sprite animation, the fight scene was very well done

now onto the criticism

it needed a loading screen, most viewers wont take animations seriously if it doesnt have a loading screen

try and develop a little bit more of a story, i know how it feels wanting to go straight to the action but hold off on it a bit

leave the text on the screen a little bit longer, it was a little bit hard to read when it flashed by so quickly

other than those few points it was a very well made animation, i can see you have a lot of potential,
good work

Deadpoolfan01 responds:

noted. i have much work to do...i'll admit that this is way better then what i use to do.

[Pineapples]

HAHAHA

that was very well done, i like what you did

[Girls!girls!girls!]

THIS IS PURE BRILLIANCE

WATCHING THIS MAKES ME CRY WITH JOY

its so moving

its like

hes singing it for a loved one, gabby

hes so passionate about what hes doing

the symbolism is superb

and the little man at the end, i can tell it shows the bond between you and your son

you sir, are a genius

and the song, it makes me smile

[Sega Vs. Nintendo Match 1]

ignore the last guy

i thought it was good, and the last guy has obviously never heard of an elimination tag, now whos a dumbass shyguy?

[Doodle Dude:Spam SE]

it was good, but

it was good but, your imitation of Bob from webl and bob, was horrible, no offence but it sounded nothin like em. work on that

[Ninja Turtles Parody :P]

dude, ok, you mustve known that this wasnt that...

good, i mean, the speech bubbles were out of synch witht he words, and donatello doesnt say not so fast yeh, he says thats a fact jack, ok, keep working

FuB4r responds:

ok i'll change that today thanks alot